1) "Local authorities does not normally provide housing."
should read
Local authorities DO not normally provide housing
2) "In which part of Britain you can hear the **ney dialect?"
I think your obscenity filter is a bit too vigorous, and is ****ing out the "rude" part of this word, assuming you mean
C O C K N E Y
3) "Time spend by young people doing work experience is called the 'gap year'."
should read
Time SPENT by young people doing work experience is called the 'gap year'.
4) Factual error:
How long maternity leave a woman expecting a baby is entitled to?
The correct answer is 52 weeks, not 26 weeks.
"As an 'employee' you have the right to 26 weeks of 'ordinary maternity leave' and 26 weeks of 'additional maternity leave' making one year in total."
http://www.direct.gov.uk/en/Parents/Moneyandworkentitlements/WorkAndFamilies/Pregnancyandmaternityrights/DG_10029285
